Last Holy Week, I went to Asturias to visit my family's boyfriend.
The journey was very long, but I enjoyed very much.
I left home at half past five in the morning and we arrived there at half past ten in the morning, because of it, we take to arrive about five hours.
When we arrived at family's boyfriend house, aunts, cousins and the small niece Laura, were waiting for us and they made happy because they took long time without seeing to us.
We were there for four days. They were a short holidays, but we had a great time.
On summer holidays
Hello Miriam
ReplyDeleteYour essay is very good. La familia de mi novio es "my boyfriend's family" Después del segundo "in the morning" tienes que poner "so" (así que...) y después "it took us five hours". (nos llevó cinco horas).
Después es mejor que no te lies con tanto caso posesivo y digas "When we arrived at their house, his aunts, cousins..." y después " and they were very happy because they haven't seen us for a long time.(y estaban muy felices porque no nos habían visto en mucho tiempo).
En general está muy bien, no te preocupes y cuanto más escribas mejor te saldrán las siguientes.
Regards,
Ana Vázquez