“Toledo on Friday”
On Friday, my youngest sister and I went to Toledo for the afternoon. We took the train in Madrid at three fifty and arrive to Toledo at Four thirty. We had a good time playing with our niece Tina. She’s very nice, has big eyes, small cute nose and curly black hair.
She lives with her mom and grandparents, dad doesn’t lives with Tina. Their house is big and beautiful; there are garden and swimming pool. Tina’s pet is a small rabbit; Daisy is a sweet bunny soft fur, she lives in a big cage in the garden, is very cute. Tina loves to pick up Daisy, but Daisy doesn’t like the height, she’s very scared…..
On Friday, my youngest sister and I went to Toledo for the afternoon. We took the train in Madrid at three fifty and arrive to Toledo at Four thirty. We had a good time playing with our niece Tina. She’s very nice, has big eyes, small cute nose and curly black hair.
She lives with her mom and grandparents, dad doesn’t lives with Tina. Their house is big and beautiful; there are garden and swimming pool. Tina’s pet is a small rabbit; Daisy is a sweet bunny soft fur, she lives in a big cage in the garden, is very cute. Tina loves to pick up Daisy, but Daisy doesn’t like the height, she’s very scared…..
Hi Teresa
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Cuando hablas de animales se usa "it". No te olvides de los sujetos.
Regards,
Ana Vázquez