Blog creado para que los alumnos de Inglés Elemental del CUID para practicar su primeras redacciones y colaborar corrigiendo las de sus compañeros.
Thursday, September 9, 2010
Wednesday, August 11, 2010
daily routines
I leave home at half past nine and I go to the gym for do aerobics, I have a shower again.
On Mondays I leave to the gym at half past twelve and I go at restaurant for meet to my friends, we have lunch and then we go to shopping, we like see the shops of shoes.
I get home at quarter to nine, I have dinner with my family. When I finish to dinner I watch tv and at half past twelve I go to bed.
Friday, May 28, 2010
The members of my family
My mother´s name is Paqui. She works in home she´s a housewife.
She´s cooks very well, I like her meat.
My mum likes watching romantic films but she can´t stand watching science films.
My mum is very beautiful, she has a short hair, a green eyes and nice smile. Her clothes is casual, she likes wearing skirt and pullover.
My father´s name is Carlos. My dad is and electrician. He´s a tall man, he´s bald and he has god a beard and grey hair. He likes reading a history books but he hate the aventure books.
My sister´s name is Mary, she has thirty-six years old. She´s a teacher of music and she works in a primary school.
She has a long dark hair, brown eyes and she´s pretty. She likes wearing blue jeans in her free time but she wears formal clothes to Monday to Friday.
My grandfather´s name is Jose, he´s the father of my mother. He´s a carpenter, he´s a handsome man, he has a grey hair, and brown eyes.
He always wears suit and tie on Sunday.
My grandmother´s name is Antonia. She´s a very beautiful, she´s a mother fo my mum. She has a short grey hair and brown eyes. She love reading romantic books and watching films of war.
Thursday, May 27, 2010
The House of my dreams.
There would be many big wooden windows in white walls.
There would have nice moderm kitchen with all the machines with kitchens works. The dinning room would be in sunny colours and we would can go out the garden when there would be hot days.
On two floor of the house would be the bedrooms. Each bedroom would have its own bathroom.
My bedroom would be a beautiful and light place with furniture made of wooden but with Japanese style .
The whole house with green technology and self.
Friday, May 21, 2010
A typical day
I leave home at half past sevent and take my car to go to work. I´m nurse and I work in a hospital.
My work star at 8 o´clock in the morning and I finish at 3 o´clock.
Sometimes I have lunch in the work with some colleagues and other times I have lunch in my house.
Then, in the afternoon, I go to the University last 8 o´clock.
At 10 o´clock I have dinner in my house
On Monday and wendays I´m going to the gym and on Friday and Saturday I´m going to pub with my friends
THE NEXT HOLIDAY
We are going to cruise for the Mediterranean and we leave from Barcelona.
We are going to see Nice, Monaco, Capri, Rome, Naples, Tunis and other cities
Maybe we can see the Prince Albert of Mónaco.
On the boat we will have many activities to do and many entertainment and in the evening will have shows and disco.
I think, we´ll stay very well.
MY FAMILY
My family consists of my parents, who are called Jesus y Maite, there are 79 and 71 years old. I have one brother and three sisters. Blanca is 44 years old and she is an accountat, Jesús is 42 years old and he is a psychiatrist, Marian is 37 years old and Maite is 34 years old and both are nurses. And I have four nephews , Dani is 20 years old , Aritz is 10 years old, Gorka is 8 years old and Iker is 2 years old.
I haven´t got grandparents.
We live in Pamplona except for my brother who lives in England
A postcard to a friend
I´m on holiday in Scotland. It´s a very beautiful city, and I´m having a fantastic time. I´m visiting all the most important sights and I´m speaking quite English too !.
At the moment I´m sitting in a pub in Glasgow with Jeru. Today we have free time for see the city . Yesterday we went to the Inverewe gardens, their are full of tropical plants, It´s a great treasure.
Tomorrow we are going to Skye island, also we´re going to see the Kilt Rocks cliffs after we´re going to Ness lake.
All this is wonderfull .
See you soon, Mª josé
My favourite book
This books is about a boy that travels across the time and he appears in 1212, in the Middle Age.
He experiences many obstacles and calamities with his new friends, until he manages to arrive his time.
I read it when I was fifteen years old, and it shoked me.
In my opinion, it's the best book I have read.
Miriam.
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
My last holiday
The last holiday I went to Tunisia with a friend. We went to tour round Tunisia.
In the hotel there were many activites, for example : go swimming, shopping, go to a nightclub, drive cars, do aerobics, etc…
We went to the beach and went for a walk on the sand , there were many people.
We rode to camel by desert and went for a walk by the desert and also went to Oasis in middle of desert by 4x4, it was very funny.
We knew some towns of Tunisia like: Cartago, Nabul, el Yem ( is a roman coliseum in ruins ) , sidi Bu Said ( the town of two colours, all the houses are white and blue ) , Hamamet, etc.
I like it all.
The house of my dreams
The house of my dreams is a top floor flat in the city centre. It´s quite big
With three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a dining room, a big kitchen , a living room and a big terrace.
The kitchen has got a cook, an american fridge, a microwave, a dishwasher, a washing machine , tumble-dryer and many cupboards.
The bedrooms, two are quite big and other is small. In the smallest bedroom I´ll have got a computer and CD player ,I´ll spend a lot of time there . In my bedroom I´ll have got a big bed with two bedside tables with two lamps, a dressing room and a bathroom.
I like it live there because , there are many shops and bars , there are many live in this place
food for a healthy diet
I eat many vegetables and fruit, also I eat some meal and fish.
In the morning I sometimes have cereal with milk or three biscuits with coffee or two toast with butter and a coffee for breakfast.
In the middle-morning I usually eat fruit for example : an apple, an orange, a mandarin etc.
At lunchtime I sometimes have vegeteables and meat ( chiken, lamb, beef) or fish ( tuna, or trout ) rice with vegetables or pasta with meat and a yoghurt
In the evening I usually eat a salad with tuna,onions, carrots, olives, corn, tomatoes and a egg.
At night I have a glass of milk or a yoghurt.
Tuesday, May 18, 2010
Film or book
We've arrived at Eurodisney, and it's terrible (for me) and worderfull (for my children).
We're staying in "an authentic old Wester town surrouning, Disney's Hotel Cheyenne".
About the weather, it has been fantastic so we've spent hours at the outdoor pool and at the whirlpool bath. It's posible to go some sporting activities (golf, treetop adventure trail, skating rink, an more activities) but we haven't played because we haven't free time.
Well, we are going to have dinner.
We see you the nest week.
Regards
Monday, May 17, 2010
My village
My village has about 2.300 inhabitants. It's near the cost, more or less than 4 km from the sea. It has beaches in the north, and it has a big village in the east, Castro urdiales, and another in the west, laredo.From the house windows i can see mountains and forests. The landscape is a beautiful valley with a river runs throught it. It's very quiet. But there are somethings than I don't like. There aren't libraries, cinemas, art galleries, train station, ect. We need to take private transportation to go to work, the student's institutes, to the cinema, to the swimming pool..... to too much activities!. I think, it's a problem!
Blanca
Saturday, May 15, 2010
Your education
Letter to a hotel
Public Transport
Description
Letter
Education
In this case, you have to write an essay about the educational system in Spain. Don't forget to write about public or private schools, years of compulsory education, length of college/ university courses and pay for universtiy.
You have an example of something similar about Japan on page 108.
Cheer up!!
Regards,
Ana Vázquez.
Film or book
Poscard
Thursday, May 13, 2010
My last Holiday
The journey was very long, but I enjoyed very much.
I left home at half past five in the morning and we arrived there at half past ten in the morning, because of it, we take to arrive about five hours.
When we arrived at family's boyfriend house, aunts, cousins and the small niece Laura, were waiting for us and they made happy because they took long time without seeing to us.
We were there for four days. They were a short holidays, but we had a great time.
On summer holidays
Thursday, May 6, 2010
I'm live in a floor in Estella.
I've got my own floor.There isn't a garage in the hause but there are tree bedrooms.
There is a bath in the bedroom one,but there isn't in the bedroom two.
Our floor have got a large living- room,with dinner area.
It has got a small kitchen.It has got a cooker,a fridge a microwave,but it hasn't got a dishwasher.
I live with my husband.we have got two children,one son and one daughter.
I've got mobil phone but my husband haven't.
My husband have got a car but I haven't.
My brother has got a cowntry cottage beautiful.That is the hause of my ड्रेंस
INMA
Wednesday, May 5, 2010
Food
I'm going to tell you about normally I eat and my favourite food.
Normally I eat pasta, green beans, green salad, meat, chicken. Really, I eating everything.
Tuesday, May 4, 2010
My country
Thanks for your mail.
I'm so glad that you come to Spain. It's a beautiful country where there is a lot of things to see.
There are very friendly people, and very interesting places such as Zaragoza, that is where I live. Zaragoza has got a typical dance, is very nice. You'll see it.
I'd like that you come to Zaragoza.
I hope you can come soon.
Best wishes,
Miriam
My house
The kitchen has got a fridge, a washing machine, a dishwasher and a cooker.
The two bathrooms have got a shower, a bath and a sink.
What do you do in your free time?
My family
My mother is 54 and she's a housewife.
My brother David is 24, he works in a factory and my brother Daniel is 25. He works in the road. I have got a dog, his name is Willy, he's an ancient old. He's very friendly.
There are more family. My boyfriend, his name is Oscar, and we are together for six years. My brother Daniel's girlfriend is Laura, and my brother David's girlfriend is Vanessa.
A typical day in my life
I'm get up at half past six in the morning, I get dressed and then I have a glass of milk and two toasts with butter and strawberry jam.
I leave my house at seven o'clock and I go to work by car. At half past seven I start work until nine o'clock. Then, I go to the library to study until twelve o'clock. Then, I go to music class, where I´m teaching to children. After have lunch, I go a school to work. At six o'clock, I go to the library to study until nine o'clock. Then I have dinner and go to bed about twelve o'clock.
Friday, April 30, 2010
Another essay
The sixth essay
Hello everybody
Here is the next essay: write an essay, about 100 words, about what you normally eat, why and what your favourite food is. (Escribe una redacción de unas 100 palabras sobre lo que comes normalmente y por qué y cuál es tu comida favorita.
Cheer up!! Sé que cuesta escribir en inglés, pero es fundamental que practiquéis, cuanto más, mejor. No os preocupéis por los errores, ya que irán desapareciendo poco a poco a medida que avancéis.
Saludos,
Ana Vázquez.
Sunday, April 18, 2010
अ त्य्पिकल डे इन मत life
I don't work,I'm retired.I go to a walk at nine o cloock, Then I go swimming every day to the sportcenter.
I cook at eleven o cloock. I have lunch with my husband, at two o cloock.
I do defferent activities in the evening,every day.On Monday I go to Pamplona.I have English class there. On Tuesday I go to the cinema.On Wednesday, again I go to Pamplona to English class.On thursday, I meet with my friends.On friday I see a film in the TV.On Saturday I watch vasque ball match in the Tv.On Sunday I meet with my family in the town house.
Friday, April 16, 2010
MY FAMILY
I live in Bailen with my family,
My name is Monica and I’m thirty years old. I work in Linares. I’m a psychology.
My mother’s name is Conchi. She’s fifty-four years old. She is a housewife. She is very beautiful and intelligent.
My father’s name is Tomas. He’s policeman. He works in La Carolina. He’s sixty-one years old. He is a good father.
I have got one brother. His name is David. He’s a student. He’s twenty-seven years old. He loves sports. He plays football, tennis and basket. He likes dogs.
I’ve got a boyfriend. His name is Marcos. He’s thirty-two years old. He´s an accountant. He has got black hair and beautiful brown eyes. He likes sport and all Tuesdays he plays football with his friends.
I’ve got only one grandmother. Her name is Beni and she’s eighty years old. She lives in Los Villares with her four sisters.
Thursday, April 15, 2010
Hi Marcos!
Thanks for your email.
I’m so glad that you want come to Spain. Now, I live in Jaen, in the south of Spain.
Jaen is a small city but it is very beautiful. In Jaen there are lots of shops and pubs, it has got some interesting monuments (The Cathedral, Santa Catalina’s Castle) and the food is wonderful.
Near Jaen there are beautiful villages: Ubeda, Baeza… but I don’t like that Jaen hasn’t got beach.
I hope you can come this year!
Best wishes
Tuesday, April 6, 2010
My family
My family
My name is Camino and I’m 37 years old. I live in Madrid close to The Retiro Park with my son. His name is Nacho and he is 18 years old. We live close to my parents. My parents are retired and they travel a lot with their friends. They usually go to Salamanca because they born there. In Salamanca live their cousins.
David is my brother. He is a policeman and he live with his girlfriend close to me. Her name is Paula and she is an English teacher in a school in Madrid.
Maria is my sister and she is married with Javier. They have got two children. Aitana is 4 and Daniel is 2. They live in El Espinar but they work in Madrid. My sister is a nurse in a big hospital.
At the weekend, we eat together in my parent’s house. In summer, we always go holidays together for two weeks.
What do you do in your free time?
What do you do in your free time?
My name is Camino and I work in an office in the center of Madrid. I do a lot of things in my freetime.
On Mondays, I swim in the swimming pool close to my house. On Tuesdays, I stay at home and I read a book, watch a film or I go for a walk with my mother for The Retiro Park. On Wednesdays, I go to paint classes because I like paint and draw a lot. On Thursdays, I go to English classes and later I meet with friends in a bar close to my house. On Fridays, I usually go to the cinema with friends or my son. At the weekend, I stay with my family in Madrid or we often go to Salamanca because we have got a house there.
A typical day in my life
A typical day in my life
My name is Camino. I get up at ten to seven and I have a shower, then I have breakfast cereal with milk and bread with butter and strawberry jam at quarter past seven.
I leave home at quarter to eight and I get to work at quarter past eight. I start working at half past eight. Later I go for a walk with my colleagues for fifteen minutes.
At two o’clock I have lunch in the office. I begin to work at three o’clock again.
I leave the office at six o’clock and I go walking to my house.
I get home at half past six then I stay with my son until eight.
I have dinner at nine o’clock everyday then I study, sometimes I read a book or I watch TV…
I go to bed at twelve o’clock Sunday to Thursday.
Thursday, March 25, 2010
What do you do in your free time?
On Mondays I watch TV, on Tuesdays I go to the gym.
On Wednesday I play a sport.
On Thursdays go to the gym and do yoga.
On Fridays I do aerobics or go for a walk.
On Saturday mornings I go shopping and go to the gym and a Sundays I talk to friends.
Your family
My parents´s name Carlos and Paqui and I have a sister, her name is Mary.
She is major that me. She is a teacher of music and student of history; she´s got a long dark hair and she´s pretty. She´s tall that me.
My mother is a housewife, she cooks very well. She´s got a medium hair and she´s got a pretty face and she´s got a green eyes.
My father is an owner of a shop. He´s got grey hair and he wears glasses. He´s got a brown eyes.
A typical day in your life.
I breakfast a glass of milk and at nine o´clock I go to the gym.
I arrived at home at half past eleven and then I study.
At half past two I have lunch.
On Mondays and on Wednesdays I go to the class.
I dinner at nine o´clock.
I go to the bed at half past twelve.
Tuesday, March 23, 2010
Monday, March 22, 2010
Fourth essay
Third essay
Tutora de Apoyo en Red
Second Essay (segunda redacción)
Hola a todos otra vez.
Ya veo que el blog está funcionando muy bien. Os recuerdo que, aquellos que tenéis mejor dominio de la materia, podéis hacer comentarios a los escritos de vuestros propios compañeros, porque es una muy buena forma de aprender.
El título de la siguiente redacción, podría ser: A typical day in your life.
Se trata de que contéis un poco todas las rutinas que hacéis en vuestra vida cotidiana, para practicar con el presente simple y también con el vocabulario de rutinas y actividades, las horas... Por ejemplo: I get up at eight o'clock, then (después) I have breakfast at half past eight.... Parecido a lo que se hace en el "listening" 2.2 pero mucho más breve.
Mucho ánimo y no dejéis de escribir, porque es fundamental que escribáis todo lo que podáis.
Un saludo,
Ana Vázquez
Tutora de Apoyo en Red
Monday, March 15, 2010
Thanks for your email.
I am so happy that you want to come to Malaga.
Malaga is a beautiful city and we can do many things there. Malaga is in the south-east of Spain and it is famous for its beaches and its good weather. There are times when we can go to the beache in winter. But Malaga also has other interestings things to visit.
We can go to the Mountains of Malaga to see the landscape and to try its typical food. It's very good.
We can go to Marbella, in the west. It is a very elegant town, where there are many shops and in addition we can visit the famous Marina, there are lots of luxurius ships and cars in him, and we can meet famous people.
We can also visit Benalmádena, where there is a very polular amusement park.
In the city of Málaga we can visit the Cathedral, the fort and especially the Museum Picasso, where we are going to see marvellous works of art.
At night we can go to have dinner to a typical restaurant of Málaga, where they serve fries fish, and then, we can go dancing to a nightclub.
We will have a great time.
I hope to see you soon.
Love.
Agus.
Sunday, March 7, 2010
Thanks for your email.
I'm so glad that you want to come to Zaragoza.
It's a very and interesting place to visit because there's a lot of things to see.
In my opinion, there's a bautiful place to live, above all in the Actur's neighbourhood.
Well, you will see when you come here.
I hope see you soon.
Best wishes,
Miriam.
Thursday, February 25, 2010
Wednesday, February 24, 2010
I´m so glad that you want to come. I only know the centre "London area"and a bit south.
There are a lot of park:Hyde Park, Green park, St. james park....
There are very palaces and monuments. Big Ben, Tower bridge, St. Paul´s Cathedral.
We have gone to Victoria Station area.
In the east of London it is the sea ,and so it is very humid.
There is tipical bus with two foors. I like British museum, in London. It is very interesting museun.
My son live in the south.In the Briston City, is very beautiful.
I dont´t like go in winter, because is very cold.London and Briston are very very beautiful citys.
I hope we meet here in summer.
Best wishes.
Inma borrador 20/02/10
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
How is it going?, here in the Spain the weather is not very good.
Spain is beautiful, with many contrasts, the north is very green with large meadows and mountains, with small but very beautiful beaches, in the east there are huge beaches and a lot of partying, oh and the modern and avant-garde city of Barcelona; in the center the huge plateaus and the great city od Madrid; in the west Galicia and its estuaries, they are fantastic, and warmth farther south. Because in the south is the sun, beaches, mountains ( Sierra Nevada, snow at a few miles from the sea) and in the south of the south the best landscape Cabo de Gata, a place to get better.
I hope you can see it soon.
Best wishes.
Ángeles
Friday, February 19, 2010
If you come to visit Elche there are many places and activities to enjoy the city. It´s a very interesting country.
Monuments, museums, shops and beaches.
The museums are "museo arquelógico" in the palace of Altamira, the museum of "la festa" there speak about the "la festa" of the "misteri", if you want to see it you have to come in August.
There are shops and you can go out by night.
Also there are beaches in the south are "los arenales".
Elche is a very nice city, I hope you can come this summer.
Best wishes.
Alma
Wednesday, February 17, 2010
First Essay (primera redacción)
Para aquellos que no habéis practicado, os voy a proponer el primer ejercicio de redacción que os propone el libro. Es muy sencillo, pero hasta que empecemos a redactar por primera vez, no vamos a entender lo difícil que es la primera vez.
Entonces, de lo que se trata es que escribáis un email, como el que aparece en la página 143 de vuestro libro de texto, donde, además, de encontrar un email, os explican las partes del mismo. De momento, lo que se pretende es que tomando este como referencia, escribáis vosotros uno cambiando algunos datos o frases. De momento eso sería suficiente.
Podéis hacerlo a través de la palabra "comments" que aparece en este blog o escribiendo un "post nuevo" como el que yo acabo de escribir.
Ánimo y no dejéis de practicar.
Ana Vázquez.
Sunday, February 14, 2010
Write
Este blog lo he creado por aquellos alumnos que no tienen quien les corrija sus redacciones, así que la idea es que todos escribáis aquí redacciones que yo, o cualquier otro tutor del CUID, os sugiera y que entre todos os hagáis correcciones. Yo intentaré corregir algunas cosas, pero vosotros también podéis decir lo que creéis que se debe corregir.
Un saludo,
Ana Vázquez.
Welcome to the Inglés Elemental Blog
I'm Ana Vázquez, Tutor de Apoyo en Red for the course Inglés Elemental in CUID.
I have created this blog for you to practise English.