Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Hy Mary,

Thanks for your email about USA. I think it's a really interesting place.

I live in Madrid. It's a big city and the Capital of Spain. You can visist Museums, churches, parks... and other places very interesting.

In Madrid you can go shopping too. There are a lot of restaurants and bares. In the north of the city we have mountains and people go for walking and in winter you can do skiing.

Near to Madrid, there small cities very beautiful like to Avila or Toledo. A lot of tourists visist this villages every weekend.

I hope you can come in June!
Best wishes,
Camino.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Camino

    Your essay is very good, but write the adjectives before the names, "...other very interesting places" "bars" in English it's only with "s".

    Then, "go walking" or "go for a walk" "you can go skiing"

    "there are very beautiful small cities like Avila or Toledo" Don't forget about plural "these villages"

    You write very well, so go on writing, please.

    See you!

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